Wow, i don't think I've seen someone use that many "ee" sounding words in one poem, tiff. Impressive ;)
I have to say this is pretty good. You have a good piece here, but it needs some improvement. It kind of waned at "C for Camelot". I think you should take a look at it and maybe change the last 3 bits to something else. It just doesn't fit with the rest of it.
Other than that, I found this rather compelling. I wish I could be like a chameleon man and blend into things...just like this dragon.
What a delightful artist's impression you have of the rock formation, and what a delightful prose poem you have created about it. It has the spirit and the mood of "Puff, The Magic Dragon", and has much soul and nostalgic philosophy associated with it!
It reminds me of Eragon without all the wars and battles.I like this b/c i can see the dragon flying over mountains emerging from it's own breathing fire in mid air.I just try to imagine it sleeping.I say it deserves 5stars.You call this a long piece but actuAlly it's just average.But hey maybe it's just long to you right? yeah figures .*THUMBS UP*.Peace and inspiration Epi.If everyone cared....