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    dots Submission Name: arc parasitedots
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    Author: ruejacobs
    ASL Info:    37/feminazi/Gehenna
    Elite Ratio:    4.91 - 566/440/154
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 316
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    dotsarc parasitedots
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    the list is short, Beloved
    neither of us could decide
    inside
    the tiny digital meter counts down
    tic and toc
    a clockwork golem
    plump as the moon

    (god-curled like a new spring fern)

    i have scratched away the days
    faithful as a black-shawled widow
    what did you shake into me?
    some new you
    some new me
    the earth is filled with ourselves
    as it is

    (it turns, piston-pure towards your hand)

    you, dragon,
    blinking at the cliffs
    and i, serpent,
    wrapped around itself
    how infinite we have become
    and how bourgeois
    how many scans in the mainframe
    before the ink runs out?

    (little cog and little gear)

    you talk of desperation
    at a table groaning with food
    i know desperation
    i met him at the door
    his mouth was full of grass
    well, you could not greet him
    because you know not his name

    (with tiny hypodermic fangs)

    there are children sleeping in the gutter
    while ours rest on silk and velvets
    how can this escape you?
    they've no fair shake, i tell you
    only stones and
    jacobs ladders
    built of rusted tin

    (this clot, this arc, this parasite)

    and still i make my list







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