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When You Know

Author: forfila
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When You Know

Will you smile?
In spite of life's pains
In spite of life's games
When death is your only promise
Life was never about what you could gain

Will you smile?
Smile, stand strong and grow
Smile even when your left alone
When the energy of your hope is gone
Know that in this collective soul there is a place where you belong

Will you smile
When all the others laugh
When they all seem to bare strength in doubt
We need to humble ourselves in humility and self sacrifice to serve a greater cause
We need to know ourselves as servants to life and subside attempts of fulfillment in plastic dreams

We can smile when we know there's no need to fight for what will never be
We can smile when we see our energies reflect in others and create an awakening of their inner being
We can smile when we know life was never really about you or me.

© 2008 Matthew

Submitted on 2008-04-17 02:42:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is excellent, Matt! Not only does it provide a very good philosophical story, but it is presented with much heart and soul, and leaves the reader with feelings of compassion, warmth, and reassurance!

Nice work!
| Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very thoughtful Matt and I'm glad to see you posted! We really create a lot of the problems there are and are always so busy with what about me when life is truly so much more than that - a group consciousness and togetherness.
Great Matt!
Happy Day!
love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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