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    dots Submission Name: Withdrawlsdots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWithdrawlsdots
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    The first day without you in my life
    Still the same yet life feels so strange
    Mind and soul alike hold the memories close
    Can't believe I've been so destructive
    Begining to feel deranged...
    I've had the hardest time moving on
    Just one day *poof* you're gone
    so much time is flyin by us
    having the strangest feelings
    Fall asleep and you're back home
    Can a heart be this b r o k e n?
    wake up and i'm all alone
    Can't pick up these pieces
    want to freeze frame those times
    Tellin myself to move on
    Walkin on this dark road
    Lost with no destination
    My systems caught in a coniption
    Prayin God please take me home
    The withdrawls have started again
    singing excuse me while i kiss the sky




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