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    dots Submission Name: Cradle to the Gravedots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 635
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    dotsCradle to the Gravedots
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    Joy that warms the body
    Mind and soul alike
    elated soaring with the junkies
    High as a kite never gonna win
    Just to feel your breath on my skin
    See your lips part and smile
    If only you would hold this Red Devil
    One last night, one last kiss
    Would let me feel it was all forgiven
    He's worse than a drug
    Better than any high
    Stuck on a dream
    Praying it wasn't a lie
    A hunger never satisfied
    A wound that never heals
    Stuck in this tower
    Dreaming of my knight
    Resisting the impulse to FIGHT
    Fight for my freedom
    Battle for my dignity
    cradle to the grave




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