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    dots Submission Name: XOXOXdots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Days pass me by
    And i think only of you
    Weeks slip past unnoticed
    Your memeory slips from my mind

    Life rushes in at me
    Survivial is all that matters
    I take what i need
    Give what i can

    Lose track of a dream
    Where are you now
    sobbing i need you
    all alone again

    Your words of comfort replaced
    With grunts of lust
    Nothing I can do
    but sit back and take the beatings

    I think of you every second
    You've infected my mind
    I can't escape your eyes
    a thousand miles away

    I would give my whole world
    To lie in your arms
    once more
    to feel your breath on my skin

    what is a world worth
    when all you need is love?




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      This was very powerful and connected with me on a deeper level altogether. The words are like little scalpels cutting away at my layers and exposing what lies hidden inside. This is a very powerful expression here and you have to understand to truly be able to take it in. I enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good work.

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    -Svw
    | Posted on 2009-09-22 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      dude i just read all of then since withdrawn and im bouts to like cry but not really cuz that would be stupid. but yo, dude. i feel exactly like this now only im not gonna forget. i cant. i refuse to forget and ill hold on to these memories as hard as i can and i love him. these are good and i cna relate even if noone else does.'






    tina
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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