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    dots Submission Name: Red Devildots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRed Devildots
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    Now that you've gone
    disappeared without a trace

    Foolish boy expected me
    to simply sit and wait

    Don't try to run any more
    and memories can't catch up

    Forget about the lies
    step up to a new life
    simply accept what i am given

    Feels like i should have
    never moved on

    Think I could have
    simply waited

    Now, the day after
    the end of forever

    I can only hope
    the Red Devil
    isn't to late
    to be the Princess




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