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    dots Submission Name: Spinningdots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSpinningdots
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    Round and round
    I'm spinning

    the world flies by
    dancing to a sperate beat
    Reaching out to touch
    familar faces far off places

    round and round
    i'm spinning

    nothing familiar surround mw
    always spinning never miss
    any beat no changes
    at home in strange places

    round and round
    i'm spinning

    looks like the begining again
    the begining that never did end
    stuck on repeat
    begining to feel like tattered lace

    round and round i'm spinning




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