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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Mind The Raindots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Lyrics/The pain inside
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1398



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    dotsI Don't Mind The Raindots
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    Hook 1x

    Let it pour,
    let it roar.
    I don't mind the rain, alone
    Let it rain out
    let it come down to sprout up
    I don't mind the rain, alone
    Now splash away.

    v1 (16B)
    Rain on my riament, vapor
    pleasant waterfall essence, navigator.
    Mama nature how do I shake her?
    Umbrella not needed in April
    Oh mosh Gah
    Out here I am cradled
    from my shoulders to my nable
    rainbow arrow,
    down comes a sparrow
    on my wrist, like hallo
    You are safe with me little bird
    wittle turns and,
    leaps of faith,
    swiftly through these streets of fate
    Grey aquarium sky.
    Bye bi polarium cry.

    Repeated hook 1x

    v2 (16B)
    I begin to think about destiny
    and what will become the rest of me
    remade to prelude
    at least that's what I believe
    Remax baloon in the air
    I'm remixing blood unaware
    My life on my skin.
    Just can't wait til the needle tears
    I'm soaked and written down
    so somebody cares.
    Small boy leaps swiftly over flames,
    veins being a little burned by flares
    See me, now you don't
    Believe me, now you won't
    I walk calmly
    and one day I'll siege supreme.




    Submitted on 2008-04-17 23:34:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ^_^ I love the rain! woot. And in all honesty I would like to hear this sung, b/c in my head, I could hear the rhythm but couldn't really put any actual music to it...(while I was listening to it in my head.....O.o....o.O). *coughs* aagh. My head hurts. If it wouldn't be too much trouble could you explain por favor? *cringes* don't hit me! I swear I didn't do it.....peash and huggles!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
      This lyrical piece cries out and there were some lines that really jumped out like, "mama nature how do I shake her?"
    Good! Do you play guitar or ?
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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