Dance with me by arodase

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Submission Name: Dance with me dots

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Author:	arodase
Elite Ratio:	4.36 - 17/19/20
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Poetry/Romance
Total Views:	118
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Dance with me dots

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Dance with me my gentleman

My sweet, kind, faithful man

So many dancers but your eyes only on me

holding your gaze in mine

The twirl, your quick moves.

The music, sound of a heartbeat

So loud in my ears

Hear it, it's yours.

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||| Comments |||
Hey
Your wrtitng is really loving
I have my own lady and she say the same thing that she like the sound of my heart beat too
But anyways...
Your poem is sweet and romantic and i like it
Write more like this
| Posted on 2008-04-18 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
perfection...
| Posted on 2008-04-18 00:00:00 | by FallenAngelJC | [ Reply to This ]

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