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Life in Eyes

Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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Life in Eyes

A gleaming feature on our face,
Mirror to our soul,
Doorway to our heart,
Profundity of emotions seen in this deep sea,
A nexus between eyes and soul.

Enticing eyes augment the charms of a damsel,
Passion of love seen through eyes,
Heart expresses through eyes,
When words fail eyes speak,
Eyes speak vehemently.

Dreams are born in eyes
And accomplished in Life.
While dreaming our eyes are closed
But mind’s eyes wide open
And takes us away to impeccable world.

Eyes are Almighty’s benevolence,
His special gift,
Divine blessing on us
To gaze at His Creation
And cherish the glories of His World.

Submitted on 2008-04-18 14:36:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great poem, how true it is that all can be seen through the eyes. It reminded me how true it is, you can see one's soul through their eyes.
Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing.

| Posted on 2010-10-05 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
  Indeed! Eyes are the windows to the soul! This was a delightful and very enjoyable poem!
| Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  you have a focus on a higher matter , your poem speaks a specialty in a certain degree , you touch on serious matters at hand, the eyes are on the society and the well -being to glorified the world, great poem , checkout my poems
| Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
  I like the subject matter and message in this poem...coincidence that I'm watching the Pope's visit right now =]
| Posted on 2008-04-19 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]

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