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    dots Submission Name: Paindots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 270/107/55
    Words: 451
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots Paindots
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    Being gay and glum,
    two phases of life,
    like dawn and dusk.

    Without tasting the acrid taste of pain
    flavor of gaiety cannot be relished.

    Time the best healer.

    The excruciating pain of all agonies
    suffered in life
    subsides with time.

    Everyday dawns with a ray of hope
    and life keeps evolving.

    Poignancy makes the foundation of life strong.

    Being gay and glum,
    both states of mind,
    mind governs our attitude.

    Human beings always complexed in the intricacies of life.

    Human life is a journey.

    This world our sojourn.

    The real purpose of life is to explore the unexplored
    to have an enlightened mind,
    for the salvation of our soul
    to enter into the world with no pain
    and be our saviour.






    Submitted on 2008-04-18 14:37:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is amazing! I love how it explains everything in such detail....
    | Posted on 2012-02-22 00:00:00 | by madsmurph99 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is excellent! Our pain gives us empathy and compassion for others pain, and gives us a greater appreciation for things that bring us joy!

    Who among us did not know the meaning of burn until we were burnt!

    Nice work lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      It is amazing how pain can be translated into words to help not only yourself but others as well. I agree with Thornful Rose, you must love yourself first and others will love you also, if they don't, their loss, not yours. Always remain true to yourself! Keep on writing.
    | Posted on 2009-07-29 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      YOU HAVE STRONG CONVICTIONS TO BE WHO YOU ARE AND THAT IS ALL THAT MATTERS. LOVE YOU FOR YOU AND EVERYONE ELSE WILL EVENTUALLY JUMP ON BOARD AND THOSE WHO DONT YOU REALLY WOULDNT WANT AROUND YOU ANYWAYS. tRY CHECKING OUT SOME OF MY WRITING AND YOULL SEE WE HAVE DIFFDERENT PROBLEMS BUT A LOT OF PAIN COMING FROM THE SAME PLACE. I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK.
    | Posted on 2009-01-27 00:00:00 | by Thornful Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how theoretically rational this is... I wish I could somehow incorporate this attitude into my life...
    | Posted on 2008-04-19 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]


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