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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    14/f/AK.
    Elite Ratio:    1.59 - 8/13/45
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 58
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    This quiet youth despretly reaching out for the truth. Falseness and lies right before my eyes. anger filled cries about the sick love filled lies. I know this game, i got your number. you tried to force me, threaten me, push me into a corner, put me up for later use. I'm not your toy. And damn it if i am going to let you get under my skin. oh hell no! your not going to win! not over my dead body! i don't care what you said! you're nobody! Go ahead be sad cuz of me and go ahead be mad cuz of me. you don't know the half of my anger. this is my moment unwind, time to uncoil and loosen up and rewind. this time here is for me to shine.




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