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    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 848
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 413



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       Dont ask wat the fuck where u thinking... I cant and I certainly have not for long.... yes, that for pointing it out... in case you are the moron


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    dotsperiodsdots
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    Not for kids,
    Not for men,
    Mind it... it cant get you pregnant

    I am so bored,
    I was told to fuck it to lose honor,
    Ah ha, holy crap, doodle doo and dindy doo...

    My name santa and I am banta,
    Am I insane, or is my sanity in vain.

    Crumble under the bundle of mormons
    and you faith dictated my con men,

    Periods....




    Submitted on 2008-04-19 04:32:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know where this is going
    but I like how its getting there.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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