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Author: rawpot
ASL Info:    24/M/India
Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383 /256 /84
Words: 69
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Dont ask wat the fuck where u thinking... I cant and I certainly have not for long.... yes, that for pointing it out... in case you are the moron


Not for kids,
Not for men,
Mind it... it cant get you pregnant

I am so bored,
I was told to fuck it to lose honor,
Ah ha, holy crap, doodle doo and dindy doo...

My name santa and I am banta,
Am I insane, or is my sanity in vain.

Crumble under the bundle of mormons
and you faith dictated my con men,


Submitted on 2008-04-19 04:32:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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