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    dots Submission Name: BLOODY TEARSdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



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       i wrote this not too long ago....its obviously about pain...


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    dotsBLOODY TEARSdots
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    another day in this lonely world
    with only more sadness to be unfurled
    no love in my life
    but one comforting knife
    not a day goes by
    that i don't want to die
    in this sad little world
    my body is curled
    in the corner
    im a mourner
    of life and death
    with one final breath
    i sigh a breath of relief
    that the knife is underneath
    my skin
    i win
    then i start to cry
    and i ask myself why
    did i really win?
    with the knife in my skin
    again i start to cry
    with bloody tears in my eyes




    Submitted on 2008-04-19 18:48:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I get to comment on a newbie. I never thought I would see the day....lol. I like it a lot. its definitely my style of poetry. you should check out mine sometime. Welcome to Elite Skills!!!! L8r!
    | Posted on 2008-04-20 00:00:00 | by chaos_flame | [ Reply to This ]



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