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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots

    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       i wrote this in like 7th grade..
    i was an emo kid.

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    I'm Lost
    I Donít Know Where I Belong
    Running Constantly
    Hopelessly Lost
    I Want To Stop Running
    Settle Down
    Find Where I Belong
    Wondering Where I Belong
    Just Maybe,
    I Donít Belong Anywhere.
    Maybe I Need To Keep Running
    A Drifter.
    Drifting With The Sands Of Time
    Never Stop
    But For Now.
    I Think Iíll Just Rest Here
    Being As Lost As Iíll Ever Be
    Lost Inside My Thoughts
    Being Lost Inside MeÖ

    Submitted on 2008-04-19 23:03:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      message bottled up, i care. poe
    | Posted on 2008-04-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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