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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 26/23/33
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 123
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 584



    Description:
       i wrote this in like 7th grade..
    i was an emo kid.


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    I'm Lost
    I Don’t Know Where I Belong
    Running Constantly
    Hopelessly Lost
    I Want To Stop Running
    Stop
    Rest
    Settle Down
    Find Where I Belong
    Wondering Where I Belong
    Maybe,
    Just Maybe,
    I Don’t Belong Anywhere.
    Maybe I Need To Keep Running
    A Drifter.
    Drifting With The Sands Of Time
    Never Stop
    But For Now.
    I Think I’ll Just Rest Here
    Sit
    Being As Lost As I’ll Ever Be
    Lost Inside My Thoughts
    Being Lost Inside Me…




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      message bottled up, i care. poe
    | Posted on 2008-04-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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