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    dots Submission Name: Last Dove in Winterdots
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    Author: arodase
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 17/19/20
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 67
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    Description:
       ~To my sweetheart~

    Metaphorical, if you wonder. But mostly love inspired than an actual portrayal of things.


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    dotsLast Dove in Winterdots
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    The last flight, last dove
    with a broken wing, left behind
    in the icy cold winter

    I'm you ice angel, your nymph
    from the snow. To shelter you
    in my warm cave, to hold you,
    to guard your lonely heart.

    Feel lonely no more, my broken angel
    for Spring is here, and so are your friends.
    I shall kiss you goodbye, and watch you
    fly towards them.

    Your winged friends may come and go.
    I see them play and dive around you in merriment
    but I shall always be here waiting,
    in my own icy cave, watching.




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      To want to "shelter you in my warm cave, to hold you, to guard your lonely heart" makes for the start of a very caring relationship. Most of us have been that last dove at times. Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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