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    dots Submission Name: Truly Realdots
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    Author: Raindrops
    ASL Info:    22/f/Louisiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 172/199/274
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Written on April 20, 2008.


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    dotsTruly Realdots
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    How can I forget you
    for what You've done
    But my mind blocks it out
    and I lose my freedom

    I know what it means
    to fight day by day
    Hold on to the unseen
    and throw my flesh away

    Its a struggle to live
    the way that I should
    but at least You're here with me
    to lighten the load.

    I could doubt whats inside
    cuz I dont feel
    but the feelings don't decide
    what truly is real

    And what truly is real
    is that you love me still
    and I'm saved cuz I believe
    that You are real.




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    ||| Comments |||
      hi nice poe.

    How can I forget you

    for what you have done

    my mind blocks you out

    if I lose my freedom, you

    I know what that means

    to fight day in, day out

    hold on to the unseen

    I give my flesh away

    It's a struggle to live

    this way that I want

    your here with me

    to lighten this load.

    I doubt what’s inside

    because I did not feel

    feelings do not decide

    what is truly real within

    is that you love me more

    I’m saved because I believe

    that You are really real to me
    | Posted on 2008-04-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]



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