THE FIRST CUT by Kornfreakinabox

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Submission Name: THE FIRST CUT dots

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Author:	Kornfreakinabox
ASL Info:	16/f/massachusetts
Elite Ratio:	2.11 - 44/61/74
Words:	64

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	60
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	423

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THE FIRST CUT dots

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tired
lonely
scared
frightened
i see the razor
i want it
i fight for it
i win
i grab it
my heart pounds
there is no sound
not even a pin drop
i put it to my skin
its cold and sharp
but it feels so good
then "the warm" flows out
i see it dripping
onto my bed
im scared
but soothed

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Ah, a cutting poem. My favorite kind of poem. I can totally relate to this poem. As a matter of fact, this sounds like my night last night. You are a very talented writer. I like how this poem doesn't rhyme. Well, good job.
Angel
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