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    dots Submission Name: hey there.dots

    Author: ira
    ASL Info:    21.f.ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 238/273/176
    Words: 330
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotshey there.dots

    Hey there (4-20-2008)

    Hey there, over there, no the other over there. I was sitting in that chair high strung to ill repair, yes I was taking a nap right there before the fallen undertaking. I was drifting onwards sun I was going faster only though the night did not become. Hey there yes over there I was there that day. I was watching eyes glazed and far away, I was sitting there just yesterday. Winters passed within a day, when thinking far beyond such songs as winters gray. The storms burrowed into the sea with fright, through the isles of miss-content and dreaming giants raft beyond the purple haze that glazed the walls in shame, not looking toward what want or need and leaving yourself to die in blackened ecstasy. Hey there, no not that over there, hey there I was sitting there, hold hands and crammed the ministers exam. Hey there I was there, sitting cold shouldered whispers rain. Hey there, yea you right there. I was sitting drinking in the smoke, hey you, no not the other you, I was there. Drinking the smoke away, I was there dreaming the dreams away, because in this day of I dont care, were all going to end up sitting there. Hey you, yea you, over there with your head in the clouds and the numerous monsoon, hey you, listen you. Ive another few words to say, hey youI was sitting there. I was face planted in that chair, hey you! Let me tell you a piece of virtue, hey you I was sitting there in that chair face planted to the ground beware, hey there, over there over that sky clad gentle bear hey there, you yeah you over there, you wanna listen to the rambles of, I was there, yes over there straight away, straight over there. Hey there, you over there, hey there, no the other opposite there, yes that there. I was sitting there.

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    ||| Comments |||
      this wud make a very interesting song if sung with good music and of course the singer will die due to lack of space to breath.

    funny thing is u did a good job, but ur presentation was not so well...

    please provide some spaces and use the enter button of your keyboard... more often.. :)

    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]

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