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    dots Submission Name: why do i caredots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 572
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       I wrote this to tell off my dad and stepdad and every thing they have ever said to me to try to brake.

    So this is to you father and stepfather go @#%& you'r selfs


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    dotswhy do i caredots
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    Why won't you just leave me in peace and let me live my life the way I want.

    Why do I care what you think or what you say about me just leave me be.

    You will never understand the pain I feel the suffering I go through everyday..

    All you do is jugde me and never try to understand .

    I try to talk to you but you'r back is always turned.

    So why do I care what you say and think about me when you don't even understand.

    So what do I care when all I have is myself.




    Submitted on 2008-04-21 08:50:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God I no what you mean. My step dad is horrid. I mean truely horrible. He hates me and ive spent the better part of the last 4 years just trying to make everything okay. No matter what I do I am never ever good enough. He only yells and searches for every fault I have.
    Even though I try not to, I see myself all the time doing exactly what I try so hard not to - That is to conform to what ever the hell it is he wants. I cant stand him, but this weird insinct I have makes me want to make everyone happy. Because if they are happy then I should be.

    But since I can never please them, who knows if im right..

    Anyways, good job babe :)

    -Safire
    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]


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