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    dots Submission Name: *Angel Face*dots
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    Author: PrInCeToNgIrL
    ASL Info:    18/F/HK
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 18/21/20
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 49
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 960



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    dots*Angel Face*dots
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    Not wearing a white dress,
    but everything shines as white,
    your hair, your face, your little chest,
    they are all like sunlight.

    Do you know, little girl?
    You are a gift from the heaven above.
    The day you were born must be a special day,
    that God is giving out every bit of his love.

    Because you are the beloved,
    I know when I look at your angel face,
    Shining white, your cheeks rose red,
    Your smile happy bright, and your voice amazed...

    Sweetheart, you are a sweet angel,
    that a drop of your tears make flowers grow,
    that a smile of yours make darkness bright,
    that the world is singing songs for you I know.

    Today, you are not as tall as me,
    but soon enough, you will grow all mature,
    but in your little chest still locks an angel heart,
    and will shine so bright as you continue grow for sure.




    Submitted on 2008-04-21 11:30:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As I have written a poem about (My Softerside)
    a poem about my daughter this poem ranks right up there with the best of them. this is a good write.
    What is it about Father's and daughters?

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      What a heartfelt and amazing tribute to the wonder and sweetness, and angelic qualities of a little girl!

    This was excellent, PG, and anyone who has raised a daughter will relate to it!!!
    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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