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    dots Submission Name: Oblivion.dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 870
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1179



    Description:
       This is Oblivion that imagined wolrd that trembles. I wolud like arrangements on this since there is much more to embroid with. Give it a go! Joachim.


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    Oblivion.
    Man is but flesh and Blood
    he knows his Doom
    but not the Hour.

    Live well my Friend!

    Music - a tongue shriller
    than the grave is calling him
    Sounds from Infinite Silence.

    Fear not the Grim Reaper!

    Yea! The dark Specter Calling
    Sounding the Deep.
    Sanguine my Friend!

    The Door is Open!

    Halls of Semblance
    The Harvest for Souls
    The Gathering is Done!

    Sounds in Silence!

    Let Judgment Begin!
    The Scrolls of LiFe
    The Rolls of Death.

    The Void Trembles!

    Fiery Pyres Ablaze!
    Softly Murmuring Hymns
    On the The Mountain!

    Sanguine my Friend!

    The Hourglass Runs Empty!
    The Sands of Time Returned
    From whence it Came.

    Oblivion!

    Live Well my Friend!
    The Choice has always been There!
    Choose Well!






















    Submitted on 2008-04-21 12:16:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is quite a gripping piece, from line 1. This life is all about chooses. We all know we are dying, but you choose how you live this life. I just love the way you played with your words, which make this an outstanding piece.

    Nie seker wat Specter beteken nie ?

    Live well my friend.
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]


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