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    dots Submission Name: NEEDING SOMEONEdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 109
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 580



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    dotsNEEDING SOMEONEdots
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    i'm lost inside myself
    i dont know what to do
    can someone please help me
    cutters need someone too
    i lay awake at night
    wondering who i'll find
    to help me when my thoughts
    are all in a bind
    screaming for someone's help
    running from my fears
    calling for someone to save me
    to help wipe away my tears
    i cant do this all by myself
    i cant stop taking the razor off the shelf
    will you help me
    can't you see
    i need someone
    to help save me




    Submitted on 2008-04-21 13:07:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      crying it loud, but its lame... not to insult u or anything... I am basically reflecting on the work... it should make the reader feel connected and emotionally driven... don't u think so... I hope u agree... try listening to any hit songs.. the lyrics move u..
    sway u..
    :)

    it cud be tough, I know.. but its worth trying
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]



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