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Submission Name: so confused dots

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Author:	lonely goth
ASL Info:	17/F/Coucil Idaho
Elite Ratio:	3.83 - 28/26/27
Words:	184

Class/Type:	Poetry/The pain inside
Total Views:	204
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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so confused dots

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I am so confused
what am i going to do
my head says to let you go
but my heart says "i love you"

why do you whisper sweet words of love
as if they do not exist
i dont know why u seeing me cry
is something that you insist

why dont you understand
the pain im feeling inside
im so tired of crying
and throwing around this diamond band

i know ive had a mask
and its protecting my heart
and with acting my beliefes
i havent exactly done my part

i feel like a confused little girl
that doesnt know how she feels
i have a lot to live and learn
so why dont you help me find whats real

but no
you chose to yell and scream and hit
and make my life living hell
god why did i fall for you
im hurting but you could never tell

im tired of it all
im giving it up right now
theres someone out there better for
someone who'll break this iron wall!

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||| Comments |||
I truly know how you feel the lonelyness the confusion the pain.
I know it's hard but It will be o.k
Iv'e been through the same thing and I still feel the pain and I wonder why I even want with her in the first place.
Some day you will find the right person for you and until then you just have to wait and let time pass by and If you need to talk to someone you can talk to me but is you choice.
I injoyed this poem and hope to read more.

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| Posted on 2008-04-23 00:00:00 | by shadow of death | [ Reply to This ]

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