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Submission Name:
g-o-o-d-b-y-e
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Author:
lonely goth
ASL Info:
17/F/Coucil Idaho
Elite Ratio:
3.83 - 28/26/27
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126
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Misc/Misc
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g-o-o-d-b-y-e
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Your the closest thing to love
i have ever felt before
but as the days pass by
i feel you slipping more and more
sometimes at night
when my dreams are turning into fears
deathly sleeping in my bed
i inturupt my nightmares
to say its all in my head
people always tell me
your first love never lasts
they also say your day will come
and the days of loss will quickly pass
Then why does it hurt so
to tell that seven letter word
g-o-o-d-b-y-e
the word thats supposed to set you free
im not the perfect girl
and im sure you'll find someone better
but until that lonely day will come
in my head, these thoughts will twirl
Submitted on 2008-04-21 13:32:59
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