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    dots Submission Name: g-o-o-d-b-y-edots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 28/26/27
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsg-o-o-d-b-y-edots
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    Your the closest thing to love
    i have ever felt before
    but as the days pass by
    i feel you slipping more and more

    sometimes at night
    when my dreams are turning into fears
    deathly sleeping in my bed
    i inturupt my nightmares
    to say its all in my head

    people always tell me
    your first love never lasts
    they also say your day will come
    and the days of loss will quickly pass

    Then why does it hurt so
    to tell that seven letter word
    g-o-o-d-b-y-e
    the word thats supposed to set you free

    im not the perfect girl
    and im sure you'll find someone better
    but until that lonely day will come
    in my head, these thoughts will twirl




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