Description: this is for another of my most recent boyfriends t hat like all the others lied...he said he loved me and cant wait till i can move in with him when im 18....then he txts me today and says he wants nothing to do with me and that i need to grow up...im so tired of getting hurt,,,im tired of crying.
LIE -------------------------------------------
i cant wait till your 18
you'll be mine forever
what a load of shit
another broken heart
all gone to pits
why is it always me
who fall for the liers and losers
who fall for the ones that dont care
and the fake retarted posers
im giving up on love
cuz it seems to never work
once they say i love you
in my memories is where they'll lurk
this one i thought was true
someone totally new
but he turned out just like the others
and i got fucked like i always do
so screw you, you know who
the big daddy you say you are
your nothing but an ass
just go back to your god damn bar
This was perfectly written. I liked it so much mainly because I can relate to it so much. I've been lied to, cheated on, and made feel like I'm so dirty and not worth anything. But yeah, I partly agree with MinervaBlu, most guys are idiots. I'm going out with an idiot, but he's only an idiot because it took us 4 years to start going out, I know, it's crazy.
I can get exactly what your saying, and maybe you should leave boys, and notice I said boys, they are nothing but trouble. I said boys because if they were real men, they wouldn't do all those things.
This was written perfectly. It flowed well, the description was magnificent. I know where you are right now. I'm on my messenger talking with my piece of crap right now. Guys are such idiots, huh? Anyway, great poem. I loved it. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Submission Name: LIE
