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    dots Submission Name: Well, Here Goes Nothing!dots
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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 701
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 922
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 4719



    Description:
       This is a poem that I wrote for the love of my life, though he will never read it. My love is unrequited, so he doesn't know, nor love my back. This, though, is what I would give him if I were ever to tell him.


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    dotsWell, Here Goes Nothing!dots
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    Well,
    Do you want a lie?
    Or the truth?
    If I tell you the truth,
    Will you believe it?
    Probably not,
    Youíll need proof,
    A heartfelt confession;
    That I shall gladly give.
    You wish to hear the truth?
    Are you sure?
    If you are,
    Keep going;
    And if not,
    Just stop here.
    Would you believe it?
    If I told you,
    That the normal me,
    Is a lie?
    A charade;
    Making sure,
    That you canít see,
    How I feel,
    Or pretend not to.
    Once I tell you,
    Youíll ask why,
    Why did I hide it?
    Well the answer is simple,
    I was scared;
    Did you feel the same?
    Probably not,
    Why would you?
    Being your Ďtwiní an all,
    Weíre close;
    It would be awkward,
    Would it not?
    Iíve never been anything extremely special,
    To anyone,
    Least of all you,
    You know this well.
    I never want our friendship to end,
    I need you to survive,
    But once I know;
    The answer to my question,
    That my heart yearns to hear,
    Whether negative,
    Or positive,
    We can work from there;
    But for now,
    I just need to ask you,
    This question of which I speak,
    In the poem of my life,
    The last one I wrote for you;
    Had a lie embedded into it,
    In a way that you could not detect,
    But here I go;
    And friends we will remain,
    No matter what comes our way,
    What Iíve been trying to ask is;
    Do you think you could like me?
    Love me, if things went well?
    Because this much I know,
    I love you,
    And I have for quite some time.
    I know how all those people feel,
    The ones who love,
    But are too scared
    To tell the person they love.
    In fear,
    Of being rejected;
    And yes,
    I know what love feels like,
    Itís not this puppy love,
    That everyone claims to have,
    Itís true,
    And quite impossible to forget.
    All you want,
    Is to be with them,
    If that makes them happy;
    And if it didnít,
    Then you would let them go;
    Because true love,
    Is based off compromise,
    Their happiness comes first,
    Then yours,
    If thereís even time.
    But for us,
    There is no time for me;
    Sure,
    I love you,
    And yes,
    I always will,
    But your needs come first;
    So if I cannot make you happy,
    Then so be it,
    And I will let you go.
    Go be with someone else,
    Go be happy,
    Fulfill your dreams,
    Your fantasies,
    And just remember,
    That if you ever need a friend,
    A sister,
    Someone to listen,
    Or anything you might need;
    Iíll be there,
    Waiting in the wings,
    For the day
    That I can comfort you,
    As you have for me,
    Hundreds upon thousands of times.
    Iíll never let my feelings,
    Get in the way,
    Of your happiness,
    And your needs;
    Weíve sang this many a time,
    ďIf you need me call me,
    No matter where you are,
    No matter how farĒ
    These words are true,
    From me to you;
    Never hesitate
    To ask,
    Please;
    Donít hide your feelings;
    Creating a shell,
    A charade,
    Trust me;
    I know how it feels,
    And itís no good.
    Be open,
    I wonít be hurt by your words,
    By your actions;
    Do what you please,
    And I will support you.
    The cost to me does not matter,
    All that matters,
    Is you,
    And your happiness;
    So now you know,
    That you
    Hold the only key to my heart.
    You are the only one,
    With enough of my heart to break it;
    But believe me,
    I am strong,
    So donít be too careful;
    It may exposed,
    But itís tough.
    Do with it what you will,
    Just remember,
    Iíll be with you.
    Wherever you may go,
    Whoever you decide to be with,
    I support you,
    I trust you,
    And I always will.
    But thatís beside the point,
    I love you,
    Truly,
    Deeply,
    Love you;
    With all my heart,
    Mind,
    Body,
    And soul.
    My only question now is,
    What will you do with it?
    What will you do with my love?
    Will you ignore it?
    Or embrace it?
    Just be sure,
    That whatever you may do,
    Itís the right decision;
    For you,
    And only you.




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      OMG U NEED TO GIVE HIM THIS. THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. EVERYTHING WAS POWERFUL EVERY LITTLE WORD. U MAD ME CRY.. I HAVE BEEN IN A PLACE LIKE U, FRIEND BUT WHAT TO ME MORE. WELL REALLY IV BEEN THERE FOR 2 1/2 YEARS BUT I HAVE TO WATCH HIM DATE GIRL AFTER GIRL..THE ONLY DIFF IS MY GUY KNOWS I LOVE HIM. IM TELLIN U THE BEST THING TO DO IS TO GIVE THIS TO HIM AND LET HIM KNOW HOW U FEEEL. U HAVE THE RIGHT TO KNOW WHAT HIS ANSWER WOULD BE AND HE HAS THE RIGHT TO KNOW HOW U FEEL FOR HIM. U DONT HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME BUT IT BE A GOOD IDEA TO TELL HIM, U JUST THINK ABOUT IT. ULL NEVER KNOW UNTILL U TRY AND U REALLY NEED TO KNOW SO TELL HIM, IF IT WORKS IT WORKS.. BUT NICE JOB ON THIS IS WAS WONDERFUL..IF U HAVE ANY Q OR WANT TO TALK ABOUT THIS OR ANYTHING IM HERE AND U CAN TALK. IM HAPPY TO LISTEN. :)
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]


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