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    dots Submission Name: Mirror Medots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 886
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    Description:
       Another Poem From A Long Time ago. i just found all my papers that had my old poems on them, and i retyped all of them.
    and im now posting them here for you.


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    dotsMirror Medots
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    Mirror Me.

    I Look In The Mirror And See.
    I See,
    A Stranger.
    It Makes Me Think, Which One Is Me.
    The One I See In The Mirror,
    Or The One I See Constantly.
    The One In The Mirror,
    Is A Patient, Calm, Patient Soul.
    Then There Is The One I See Constantly.
    Who Is An Impatient, Angry, Restless Soul.
    I Want To Be That Mirror Me,
    I Cannot Bear This Constant Soul.
    I Need To Jump In That Mirror.
    So I Can Be The Reflection.
    And The Reflection Can Be Me.
    I May Need To Fight Him.
    Fight For My Freedom.
    A Fight For My Inner Reflectionary Peace
    I Canít Take This Anymore.
    I Can Stand Physical Pain,
    Even So, This Pain Is Beyond Any Other.
    Any Other Type Of Pain Iíve Ever Felt Before.
    This Is The True Inner Emotional Pain.
    Have You Felt It Before?
    To Not Know Who You Are?
    Where You Belong?
    And What Youíre Even Doing Here?
    Iíve Started To Realize,
    That Who I Am Is Not Who I Want To Be.
    Even Though You Already Know,
    Iíll Tell You Who I Want To Be.
    I Want To Be That Kind, Caring, Gentle,
    Mirror Me.




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      A best friend. Oh, how I love the mirrors. I'm only half-kidding. I loved it. it reminds me of the poem I read which was by one of my closet friend and he wrote
    " to define yourself is to look at someone eles..."
    I loved that line. I liked this work because it was more in your face type.
    -Rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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