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    dots Submission Name: Darknessdots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Description:
       Another In The Series of older poems of mine. this one was about my anger issues, where i was scared of blowing up on people with all of my pent up anger.


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    dotsDarknessdots
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    The Darkness

    The Darkness Consumes Me.
    Creeping Out From Inside.
    I Try To Run, I Try To Hide.
    I Wish It Away.
    Yet It Still Creeps Out
    From Inside.
    It Makes Me Do Things
    I Wish Not To Do.
    It Makes Me Hurt,
    Those That I Care For.
    I Donítí Want This Darkness No More
    But I Have To Let It Go.
    I Have To Set It Free.
    There Is A Fear Inside Me.
    Saying ďDonít Let It Out,
    You Might Do Something DeadlyĒ
    So I Will Carry This Darkness With Me.
    Iíll Carry It Until I Die.




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