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    dots Submission Name: Voicesdots

    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 609
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       yet again, another one.

    this was more about people trying to influence my decisions... and it got annoying.
    i dont like to be rushed, or pushed, or guilted into anything. if im gonna do it, im going to do it.

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    The Voices In My Head
    The Voices In My Heart
    Voices From The Ones I Love
    Voices From The Ones I Hate
    They Come From all Around Me.
    They Come From Inside Me.
    Why Donít They Shut The Fuck Up
    Why Donít They Just Shut It
    So I Can Hear My Voice
    My Voice From Inside Me.

    Submitted on 2008-04-22 08:08:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, I can feel it too. I can relate. but
    I hear all and listen to only a few,
    just so I can hear Me.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      Great poem, simple and effective, gets the point across Keep on writing, Nice Visuals, I really felt you, you used all the perfect words for the situation, Great poem, simple and effective, gets the point across. I didnt get part of it but I know what you mean as a whole.
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]

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