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I keep to myself, I've hidden away,
I no longer dream wondrous dreams, I only give up
I write these words in hopes thAt they have meaNings
I write these words to show you I have feelings
I hold out my hand in hopes that you'll grasp it
I hold back my heart because you dropped it
I cry during the day because you are not here
I cry during the night because she is there
I look to the heavens for a answer or two
I look to you for a reason or two
I no longer see my Star of Hope
I no longer see you as my Star of Love
Submitted on 2008-04-22 12:49:47
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pretty good I like it. You are an interesting poet from what I've read. Keep up the good work.
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