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    dots Submission Name: Iandots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 586



    Description:
       Just a little something. The name(title) is the first three Cap. letters.


    YOu can add this into the end if you want

    I keep to myself, I've hidden away,
    I no longer dream wondrous dreams, I only give up


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    dotsIandots
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    I write these words in hopes thAt they have meaNings

    I write these words to show you I have feelings

    I hold out my hand in hopes that you'll grasp it

    I hold back my heart because you dropped it

    I cry during the day because you are not here

    I cry during the night because she is there

    I look to the heavens for a answer or two

    I look to you for a reason or two

    I no longer see my Star of Hope

    I no longer see you as my Star of Love





    Submitted on 2008-04-22 12:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      pretty good I like it. You are an interesting poet from what I've read. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2008-04-23 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]


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