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Submission Name:
True Love
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Author:
Xena
ASL Info:
17/F/Pluto
Elite Ratio:
2.25 - 24/20/22
Words:
31
Class/Type:
Poetry/Passion
Total Views:
614
Average Vote:
3.0000
Bytes:
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Description:
It's really small but it was my very first poem, and it is meant to be used for Valentines day
True Love
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
The love is true
I give my heart to you
We beat as one
Forever more
The bond we share
Can not be torn
Submitted on 2008-04-22 13:03:39
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it's short but good.
| Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by
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