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    dots Submission Name: True Lovedots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 567
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 189



    Description:
       It's really small but it was my very first poem, and it is meant to be used for Valentines day


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    dotsTrue Lovedots
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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    The love is true
    I give my heart to you
    We beat as one
    Forever more
    The bond we share
    Can not be torn




    Submitted on 2008-04-22 13:03:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's short but good.
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by sarahthegreat | [ Reply to This ]


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