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    dots Submission Name: Winter, pt. 2dots
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    Author: awastedsky
    Elite Ratio:    5.48 - 103/120/80
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Winter is a part.


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    dotsWinter, pt. 2dots
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    There's something so romantic
    about backtalk frostbite
    nipping at the tips of your ears
    while you're seeking
    the isolation of winter.

    I am one to sit in the snow
    and sigh with fervor
    the truths of living daily life
    to an appropriately barren wilderness.

    Don't listen to the tiger tell you
    tiptoes are forbidden amongst the silent
    for there are lessons to be learned
    over near the extremes of the earth.

    Nod your head with proper understanding
    while the wind whispers lies of fright and uncaring
    as Winter, though timid, is open to all suggestions.

    I make sure to take heed, to be cautious
    and keep my words inaudible
    and my footsteps invisible
    as I welcome the deep chill of revealed character.

    And so, I exist
    bathing in the permafrost and dancing in the tundra.




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      Absolutely spectacular. I love writing about winter; it's my favorite season. Although little goes on in the winter, it's absolutely profound. It is the most philosophical season, and holds the deepest meaning. Summer is pretty to think about, but you don't do much thinking when it comes around. But the solitude of a winter night and the vastness of a white graveyard, where all things are dead or sleeping, even in silence speaks pages of wisdom.
    | Posted on 2008-08-15 00:00:00 | by UnderINK | [ Reply to This ]


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