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    dots Submission Name: Runawaydots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I know It isn't easier to run but I wish it was but I have to live with the falts in life like everyone else But that doesn't mean I have to like it


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    I want to runaway and never look back.
    To just let go of every thing and run.
    I wish could change my past and take all my shame to the grave and I shall.
    The darkness of my past haunts me every waking moment of my life and if I could trace all the wrong the wrong move that I made I would.
    Iv'e fallen in to the shallow waters of my life and renewit but I have to live with the darkness of my past.
    the truth is It's easier to run and yet I can't




    Submitted on 2008-04-23 07:36:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this - its something relatable. i like the phrase ; "fallen in to the shallow waters of my life" it gives a touch of nature to the poem and i find it particular unique.
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem even though it is short. most people, mainly teens, feel like this. just to run away and to never look back would be heaven. but we just need to hold in if even for a little while longer. only critisism is one word. I've not Iv'e.
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by PrincessOfDark | [ Reply to This ]
      it doesnt matter how far you run, you could never run with yourself. i mean, you could find ways to escape your mind n sh!t but really, you cant run away from youself, you past or your memories. it wont work, trust me. i grew up a runner and sometimes i still get that urge to run so far away that no one will ever find me and ill be happy n free from all of this but the truth is, i wont cuz then i would never know what the rest of it, if maybe it could work how i would love it to. its hard to explain. be cool yo. nice work. a couple typos but idk. [censored] happens.


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    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I know all to well what you mean man. To many things go wrong in the world but you can't dwell on it. Don't repress it either it will just [censored] you up in the long run. so just move on. GOOD POEM BY THE WAY. Damn caps lock.
    | Posted on 2008-04-23 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]


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