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    dots Submission Name: Inevitable-Outcomedots
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    Author: thegrayhatter
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Not much to say. The natural worl is everything. Man complicates things for selfish reasons when all we need to survive and be happy was here to begin with.


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    The day is fast approaching when all Life will reach Its end,

    And the damage man has done to Earth he can no longer mend,

    When a child looks out his window, and all he can do is pray,

    Because the only place a bird or tree can be seen is in a case on display,

    Man's greed is the engine, and his sloth the burning fire,

    That destroys the natural world, and causes evil to transpire,

    Each man is left with the choice of two opposing paths to take,

    And if he chooses the common path there is no fixing his mistake,

    So we can conform to the system and leave all hope behind,

    Or we can fight an unwinnable war in effort to save all living kind.




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      I like your view on what the world is turning into...I dont think many people see it as extreme but I totally agree with you. I think that your point that it will be too late if we dont try to fix it now is so true. I liked the overall style of the poem and it sends a good message even a wake up call to people...great job
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by deathbelow | [ Reply to This ]



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