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    dots Submission Name: No Regretsdots
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    Author: juss_kriss
    ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404/445/126
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsNo Regretsdots
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    verse 1:
    not every memory
    is one worth saving
    but for every one i tossed away
    i found three more to stay
    things might have been bad between us
    but i won't forget what we had
    and i'll never forget you
    even though years down the road
    i won't be seeing you

    chorus:
    it's time to go our own ways
    for too long we've held on
    and now you've found another to love
    it's obvious you don't need me
    the way you use to want me
    so i'll give you your space
    i'll put miles between us
    and the day you finally realize
    everything you think i can't see
    it'll be too late
    cause you couldn't love me

    verse 2:
    not every tear i cried
    was over all the pain
    you made me feel the past three years
    cause i have seen the good
    and it outweights all the sad tears
    no, i won't hold this against you
    i'm grateful for what you gave
    even though you walked away
    i won't feel the pain

    bridge:
    i may not be the one
    but that's alright with me
    you'll see when you learn
    how to open your eyes
    no i'm not gonna cry anymore
    i've over this, i've over you
    though it might not show
    i know it's true

    coda:
    it's obvious you don't need me
    the way you used to want me
    and the day you realize
    everything you think i can't see
    it'll be too late
    cause you couldn't love me




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