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    dots Submission Name: veins of poisondots
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    Author: xana
    ASL Info:    17/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 34/35/24
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 798
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 670



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    dotsveins of poisondots
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    Veins of poison, lungs of smoke
    Always bite but never choke.
    Having sex is just one step
    Of the endless games and wrecks.
    Smoke the herb and be at peace
    Dont hold back: cum, and release.
    Close your eyes and you will hear
    All the wonders of the world.
    Take a breath to bring you near
    All the tales ever told.
    Now you feel the war is over
    Every battle is at peace.
    Now you sense the final wonder:
    Shocked, the Time will scream and cease.
    Every moment giving poison
    To your ready brain and heart;
    Every moment bings you closer
    To the never-ending start.




    Submitted on 2008-04-23 16:58:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) i love it, the rhyming is awesome, i like how you mix it up from aabb to abab to aabb again =] and i like the mood of the piece and the meaning behind it
    | Posted on 2008-05-14 00:00:00 | by Alexandra | [ Reply to This ]


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