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    dots Submission Name: Alcohol Took You Awaydots
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    Author: Brianna_rose
    ASL Info:    14
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 11/13/11
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 108
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    dotsAlcohol Took You Awaydots
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    Her cries so delicate
    Her words so real
    A bruised body
    A broken mind
    hateful words thrown from all directions
    How much more can she take
    Daddy's gone, and mommy's about to break
    A pint of vodka lying on the table
    mommy on the floor
    that's what I see when I come threw the door
    The ambulance come and go
    does daddy even know
    The alcohol is tearing you away
    Do you remember hitting me again and again
    The Drugs going threw my system
    I don't feel the pain, no not anymore
    A broken girl, coming from a broken home
    mommy doesn't love me, and daddy, who knows




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    ||| Comments |||
      Sad. so sad. very well written. It shows the whole broken picture as if I were looking in the window.
    | Posted on 2008-07-06 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this, i can relate to it, i can feel the multiple emotions, and i get more than one image from it.
    its a good poem..but sad in the pain.
    | Posted on 2008-04-23 00:00:00 | by KimmyBoo | [ Reply to This ]


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