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    dots Submission Name: my faultdots
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    Author: tainted-faerie
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 12/16/25
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmy faultdots
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    she looked at me in the eyes
    with tears on her face
    and tried to tell me she was fine
    but i saw the truth,
    I saw through the line.
    she coulnt tell me
    what went on behind the four walls of her home,
    but i saw in her eyes,
    she was desperately alone
    i knew i couldnt help,
    it wasnt my fault from the start,
    I looked at her
    and felt my heart-- break
    Cause i knew all those smiles were fake
    I would have saved her if I'd had the chance
    but by the time it all,
    It was too late,
    and my dreams started to fall.
    I know now that i should have stayed,
    even when she told me to go
    there are so many things
    I know have to know.
    He life was taken
    and mine was suddenly turned around,
    and shaken
    i miss her more than ever,
    When I think of how i could have helped
    But most of all,
    I think its my fault,
    She's 6 feet under ground.





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