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    dots Submission Name: Tears of...dots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1047



    Description:
       I wrote this last night after having a heart to heart talk with my best friend. We were talking about everything that has happened in the last four years. All the things that we've gone through and all the tears that we have cried.


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    dotsTears of...dots
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    Tears are running down my face as I write this.
    They are tears of joy, pain, happiness, sorrow, courage, fear, exitement and exhaustion.

    Tears of joy
    Reminding me of all the good times I have had

    Tears of pain
    after having my heart broken

    Tears of happiness
    As I laugh and have fun with my family and friends

    Tears of sorrow
    Having to stand near the grave of a loved friend

    Tears of courage
    after suffering discrimination and surviving it all

    Tears of fear
    As I see the people I love, suffering in diffrent ways

    Tears of exitement
    while I sit here and dream of how college'll be

    Tears of exhaustion
    while sitting back and realizing that I am finally done

    I reach up and wipe away my tears
    Putting all the memories away into a file in my head

    As I start getting ready to become a part of
    The graduating class of 2008




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    ||| Comments |||
      To some people, poets are little kids with finger
    paintings looking for a refrigerator to put them on. Go out into the world and be a Rembrant.


    The Poor Man's Poet.

    P.S. This is a good write, I like it.
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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