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    dots Submission Name: Flowers of All Colorsdots
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    Author: Megsrus aka Meg
    ASL Info:    15/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 9/63/39
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 743
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 177



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    dotsFlowers of All Colorsdots
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    Tulips, daisies, and roses too
    Sunflowers and violets blooming for you
    Lillies and magnolias shining so bright
    Flowers of all colors dancing in the light




    Submitted on 2008-04-24 14:47:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Short, but neat, nifty and a musical little poem which I enjoyed a great deal, indeed! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      ok, this must have been the smallest piece of work I have come across and it conveys something very pleasant.

    good work, but do try to include more.
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      finally someone writing with some daylight in their words. So many people seem so dark and dismal when they write, I know its how they feel, but where are all the happy people?
    I really like your poem, its short, lovely, sweet and all things good. I'll evev add it to my list of fav's. soon as I find out how.

    The Poo Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely short but sweet poem, with a bright springtime mood! Brings to mind strong word pictures and colors!
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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