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    dots Submission Name: Flowers of All Colorsdots

    Author: Megsrus aka Meg
    ASL Info:    15/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 9/63/39
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 719
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsFlowers of All Colorsdots

    Tulips, daisies, and roses too
    Sunflowers and violets blooming for you
    Lillies and magnolias shining so bright
    Flowers of all colors dancing in the light

    Submitted on 2008-04-24 14:47:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short, but neat, nifty and a musical little poem which I enjoyed a great deal, indeed! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-06-18 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      ok, this must have been the smallest piece of work I have come across and it conveys something very pleasant.

    good work, but do try to include more.
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      finally someone writing with some daylight in their words. So many people seem so dark and dismal when they write, I know its how they feel, but where are all the happy people?
    I really like your poem, its short, lovely, sweet and all things good. I'll evev add it to my list of fav's. soon as I find out how.

    The Poo Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely short but sweet poem, with a bright springtime mood! Brings to mind strong word pictures and colors!
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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