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    dots Submission Name: UNWANTED (KILL HANNAH)dots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 55
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsUNWANTED (KILL HANNAH)dots
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    I dedicate this song
    To the boys who don't belong
    To the girls who get it wrong
    I'm dedicating this
    To the ones that don't fit in
    Are you hearing this?
    Are you hearing this?

    Unwanted, unneeded
    You've always been mistreated
    Hang on!
    (Don't do what they say to)
    Unwanted
    And been for so long
    Say, "Hey, Mom!
    I'm never coming home again"

    I dedicate this song
    To my boys who are strong
    They just don't go along
    I'm dedicating this
    To the girls who don't fit in
    From the orphanage
    Now here this!

    Unwanted, unneeded
    We've always been frustrated
    hang on!
    (Don't do what they say to)
    Unwanted and been forever
    Said, "Hey, Mom!
    We're never going home again!"

    I dedicate this song to the ones who don't belong...
    Unwanted
    To the ones who don't belong...
    I know who you are
    Hang on!
    We're never going home again




    Submitted on 2008-04-24 20:32:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lovely. Powerful, nice. Inspiring. This one's for the underdogs. Great work. :)

    Eliza
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok,

    after I read this, I instantly wrote a poem, I title it... "me & pay"

    hope you will read it.

    Well, your work inspired in me something to write.. :)
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]



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