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    dots Submission Name: The Whole Poem "the Beginning"dots
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    Author: Sharati_hottie
    ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86/81/90
    Words: 561
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 920
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 3420



    Description:
       I put all Three parts of the poem "The Beginning" together... and this is what I have.


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    dotsThe Whole Poem "the Beginning"dots
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    His 18th birthday, It was a blast
    mom gave him a present they thought would last
    when he unwrapped it, his jaw, it dropped
    she couldn't help, but laugh a lot

    All of a sudden she was on a shoulder
    & being run up the stairs with, him the holder
    they were gone for hours after that
    no one seen them, they just heard their "act"

    When they finally came down both their bodies glistened
    All they could do was laugh as the two listened
    The first night she went there was a bad one
    she found out something very wrong

    She had her first grand mal
    She didn't quite remember if it was the beginning of spring or end of Fall
    All she knew is that there was still snow on the ground
    It took them all of ten minutes before she was found

    Then after that to the hospital she went
    She didn't know how she had gotten there,
    just remembered she was wet,
    from the snow she had fallen into

    Then in the doors, she had to go through
    On a bed they put her & locked her down
    So that she wouldn't hurt herself or break her crown
    Then on with the tests, they proceeded

    She seemed to get colder as they got heated
    looking for more ways to poke her skin to find something wrong
    All the while in her head ran this song
    she couldn't seem to get away from

    She knew that it seemed dumb
    Anyway, now, they weren't together
    they believed they would last forever
    they thought they were pregnant who knows how many times

    They were ready to spend every single little dime
    then something happened and they started fighting
    I’m back again, with the same old tale
    About this guy and the same little girl

    They made it last for 7 months
    But in public they put up fronts
    To hide their anger from each other
    The only one that helped them was his mother

    When they lived together in their cozy home
    At first it seemed like nothing would go wrong
    We went through our lives day after day
    Hoping that nothing would go astray

    The story begins and ends the same,
    with a girl in love and a boy insane
    She hurt that boy and she had regret it,
    But the way she felt will never get this

    Way into my heart again
    Still the same little tale of this boy and girl
    yet this time they were together
    and the world did unfurl

    they thought yet again
    They could make "This" work
    Then the same old story
    The girl drove the boy to the end

    She pushed him away,
    and yet again the same old story
    from beginning to end
    She broke his heart, became self righteous

    He lost all thoughts, his mind did fight this
    He wanted her more than ever
    yet he knew she would hold the endeavor
    They fought and screamed

    they tore each others hearts out
    they are done for now
    and she think forever
    She left him again

    she could no longer see
    that he cared about her as said he
    So now I am done with "The beginning”




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 00:20:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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