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    dots Submission Name: deathlydots
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    Author: Ceedra47
    Elite Ratio:    0.51 - 2/5/45
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    A loud crunch resounded
    along a blood curdling scream,
    a dark chamber of torture,
    a nightmarish dream.

    Deathly laughs of insane,
    echoing down the hall,
    the torches along the fright,
    illuminating all.

    Claw marks among the blood,
    desperate prisoners howl,
    sound of whips on skin,
    a putrid blood gone afoul.

    Collars;
    taming empty shells of man,
    prominent sanity disembodied,
    although skin deep it ran.

    Bitter copper flavor abounds,
    leaving many a'tongues palette dissolved,
    a desperate need for escape called out,
    although the essence of the prey had been resolved.

    Long foretold destruction ,
    amongst the human race,
    against the grievances of our "sin",
    our kind - to them - a disgrace.

    We survive on pure instinct,
    living within our flaws,
    because we ran such amok,
    a just reason for their cause.





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