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    dots Submission Name: Atlantisdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 1111/1235/613
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsAtlantisdots
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    In sunless realms beneath the waves
    The midnight stars shine down
    Upon that city’s foundered graves
    About that time lost town.

    Upon her streets the crabs converge.
    Sea snakes of palest hues
    From out her fanes throng surge on surge
    Across wide avenues.

    In palaces long strewn with silt,
    The scene of pomp and sin,
    Its fluted columns lurch and tilt
    Above Leviathan.

    In all this foundered continent,
    In temples to the Sun
    Both in and out each monument
    The brackish waters run.

    In parks where once great oaks would soar
    Above the grassy lea,
    Can now be heard the far off roar
    Of tides above the sea.

    When in some future far design,
    Beyond all human ken,
    The Fates will once more realign,
    Atlantis rise again.




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 10:02:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Mystic Atlantis, where hope lost and myriad fantacies lie! This is a most excellent poem, tinged with the lure and lore of the Sea, and anchored by the myth of mighty Atlantis where ferverent stories and untold ghosts lie buried!

    Most excellent indeed! Five stars for this one!!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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