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    dots Submission Name: Dreamdots
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    Author: arodase
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 17/19/20
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A purpose to inspire.


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    dotsDreamdots
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    Lying awake, next to you

    hearing your breath, calming slumber

    I wonder how I am ever blessed with such love

    For before you I dared never to dream

    Only dreams of blood and war, of pain and misery

    Yet now I dream of you, your touch, your kiss

    Ever so passionate, fresh, new with each passing day



    Now I begin to dream of a new Kingdom,

    spurned from our own ideals, hopes, desire.

    The Wheels of Time have started turning,

    The books of knowledge are in place, the tools,

    the building blocks are there awaiting your mighty hands.

    You are my Hope, my confidence in your intelligence

    it is time to seize the chance, feel the spirit -

    only Focus is what's left, it is time to move forward

    with both in place, in breakneck speed.



    The Time has come, can you feel it in your skin?




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 10:17:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      For the time is now
    Forever and Once an Eternity
    I am with you
    And Only You...
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by FallenAngelJC | [ Reply to This ]


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