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    dots Submission Name: Fear of the Daydots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    15/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 12/78/71
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Them
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    dotsFear of the Daydots
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    It thrashed away
    Your heavenly hide out
    By the fears of the day
    Not able to control the scene
    Just another bystander
    Watching it smash your dream
    Tears spilling down
    And you can’t help
    But always wear a frown
    Because you know you lost
    And the end is in sight
    And your heart is now frost
    It has gone away
    You heavenly hide out
    Because the fears of the day
    You’re to blame
    Letting it win
    So go hide in shame




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 13:30:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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