Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: this cardinal heartdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 386
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1051



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsthis cardinal heartdots
    -------------------------------------------


    i wonder
    if the evils of this world
    have their own master
    & if they scream up
    at the same split-plum moon of heaven
    that i do.

    there is a round torture to living
    that is beautiful.
    not just because of its ability to destroy
    but also for its tendency
    to replenish death systematically.
    such is life...

    last night,
    in the crest of a field,
    i released my purple
    into the unknowing dark.
    where the honey meets the teeth,
    this is where i'll go plenty mad.

    have i stepped off
    into the last ghost of myself
    for nothing?
    will each day
    be just another creature for the hanging?

    there is hope left
    in the fever of the wood.
    i must walk slowly,
    gather tenderly every precious breath
    & fold over
    into the soft hush of autumn
    that i've known.

    this cardinal heart
    is ready for the fog...




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 14:02:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    160698

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry