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    dots Submission Name: this cardinal heartdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    i wonder
    if the evils of this world
    have their own master
    & if they scream up
    at the same split-plum moon of heaven
    that i do.

    there is a round torture to living
    that is beautiful.
    not just because of its ability to destroy
    but also for its tendency
    to replenish death systematically.
    such is life...

    last night,
    in the crest of a field,
    i released my purple
    into the unknowing dark.
    where the honey meets the teeth,
    this is where i'll go plenty mad.

    have i stepped off
    into the last ghost of myself
    for nothing?
    will each day
    be just another creature for the hanging?

    there is hope left
    in the fever of the wood.
    i must walk slowly,
    gather tenderly every precious breath
    & fold over
    into the soft hush of autumn
    that i've known.

    this cardinal heart
    is ready for the fog...




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