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    dots Submission Name: Spring Melodydots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsSpring Melodydots
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    Every spring,
    Birds do sing.
    Puny droplets of morning dew,
    Everything begins anew.
    Having picnics covered with flowers.
    Lay there for hours.
    Watch and listen to the noon day Lark.
    Spring is not the end but a whole new start.




    Submitted on 2004-02-07 00:27:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can picture myself waking up every spring morning or afternoon and reciting this alone under my breath.
    That's my first impression.I love, mainly because Spring is my favorite time of the year and plus it's on it' way in a few.It's word bring a breeze that many expect to come pass them, it's like the first signal of a clean slate of a start...That Spring breeze.
    | Posted on 2011-01-26 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      nice message, I think you can do better I enjoy your writes this one is off one rhythem and your poems usually have a flare to them,
    | Posted on 2004-02-07 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]


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